Sunday, September 27, 2009

Feedback

Hector, you need to cite your sources because when you do not is plagiarism. Also you need to check the sentences you write before you post them, they need editing.

Aldo, I loved your perception. You can develop a very interesting writing style. Just make sure you cite your sources, even if you paraphrase you still need to cite.

Eduardo, good research, but you missed your own perspective. I will explain in class how to cite properly.

Azul, you got the wrong mosque!

Cesar, I was expecting the definition of the elements you pointed at. You also need to cite your sources.

Melissa, you look at different sources and that is great. I would like to read more about your opinion on Notre Dame.

Good Job Andrea! Very interesting.

Luis Mario, Gargolas are very interesting, I am going to upload a very interesting picture you might like. You need to cite the source of your ideas as well.

Mariana, your comment is very interesting and you know, Hagia Sophia is particularly interesting because it has been as well an orthodox church and a mosque. I do not consider Wikipedia is a serious source for your academic work.

Alex, you wrote a very interesting post. Don´t you find interesting the way emperors were portrayed so close to God and how they considered that they pleased the Virgin Mary giving her new buildings for the empire?

Mr. Martin, good post but you did not include your sources! You need to include your sources ALL the time.

Paco, congratulations! Excellent job! There are still some tips I will explain in class about bibliography and citing properly.

Jorge, your information is interesting but it is not cited, therefore is considered plagiarism.

Marco, unfortunately nowadays it is a museum, not a church anymore. Remember the pictures I showed you with the mosaics? Those pics are from a blog lobbying for
Hagia Sophia to be turned into an orthodox church again.

Mayram and Abraham? I missed your comments.

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